Kara, Good Idea to have the green roof. It may be a good Idea to show the slops of the non-green areas of the roof in the site plan (roof plan) with level numbers and indicating, may be incorporating how would they collect the rain water?
Would the site plan show more the canyon? on 28 January you mentioned in a comment that The canyon would be open to the sky. is that still valid?
The shallow pools are in the good place. water garden? would you indicate that using sketch or precedent image? What is happing there? Kids play with fountains and water elements? how public react with it visually? while you have this tree in the corner? People seating next to water as in Copley square? The green wall details are great, wish they could be seen bigger so I learn from it. Please blow up the drawings (for now) big not in the nice looking sheet.The nice sheet occupy alot in the page.
You have a very good Mass of a very good concept building. some indications on it and illustrative views would show how efficient the design is.
looking forward to see other aspects of your project in more details.
Thanks Amr for your comments. The Sarnafil green roof accommodates slopes up to 30 degrees. Perhaps a small detail of a roof area showing water collection and the downspout? I think that will be something I will look at once I have the model finished. I do have some changes in the plan I need to address. (Once the plans are modeled then you realize the changes that must take place) It is better and makes the interior space more dynamic. I hope to have some shots up by the end of the week. The water garden would be an ecosystem; typical wet lands foliage. Thanks again for your thoughts and suggestions.
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Kara,
Good Idea to have the green roof. It may be a good Idea to show the slops of the non-green areas of the roof in the site plan (roof plan) with level numbers and indicating, may be incorporating how would they collect the rain water?
Would the site plan show more the canyon? on 28 January you mentioned in a comment that
The canyon would be open to the sky. is that still valid?
The shallow pools are in the good place.
water garden? would you indicate that using sketch or precedent image?
What is happing there? Kids play with fountains and water elements?
how public react with it visually? while you have this tree in the corner?
People seating next to water as in Copley square?
The green wall details are great, wish they could be seen bigger so I learn from it.
Please blow up the drawings (for now) big not in the nice looking sheet.The nice sheet occupy alot in the page.
You have a very good Mass of a very good concept building. some indications on it and illustrative views would show how efficient the design is.
looking forward to see other aspects of your project in more details.
Keep up the good work.
Thanks Amr for your comments.
The Sarnafil green roof accommodates slopes up to 30 degrees. Perhaps a small detail of a roof area showing water collection and the downspout? I think that will be something I will look at once I have the model finished. I do have some changes in the plan I need to address. (Once the plans are modeled then you realize the changes that must take place) It is better and makes the interior space more dynamic. I hope to have some shots up by the end of the week. The water garden would be an ecosystem; typical wet lands foliage.
Thanks again for your thoughts and suggestions.
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